This is another one of my Limerick Poems,
There once was a girl called Livia,
She liked to do trivia,
One day she got one wrong,
So she hit her head on a gong,
Now there's one less Liv,
But we still must deal with the other
Do u think its better with six lines, or just one long fifth line?
Thursday, June 21, 2018
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Hi Isana Its Amber here from St francis of Assisi,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you added your poem on this blog, This reminded me of when I write poems. I think it is better with six lines because it could look weird,
Why did you do this poem?
Do you like writing poems?
- Amber
Thanks for your feedback. I wrote this poem because my friends and were writing poems about each other. Also to answer your question, no I am not very fond of writing poems
Delete-Isana